Wrinkledm: Looks good! But as you said the cockpit opening is so small you won't see much of it....
I've got a Prismacolor silver pencil I use a great deal, gives me more control than even a small drybrushing brush, I'll have to look into using some of the other colours too. Thanks for the tip Sibz.
BTW: It's Cliff or Gamera or whatever, no big deal.