Tankerbuilder, the only real problem I see is that you're still hitting the space bar before commas and periods - and occasionally not hitting it AFTER punctuation marks. ff you can break those habits, you should be in pretty good shape.
I think you outsmarted the Forum program with your deliberately misspelled words. They were so wild that the program grossed out, instead of "fixing" them for you. I get thoroughly fed up when it sticks an apostrophe into the middle if "its" (it just tried it) or "were."
I'm not sure whether that behavior originates with FSM's program or my I-phone's. Maybe the latter; I probably shouldn't blame FSM.
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