Roger that, Aaron... I'm ok with "Artistic License", believe or not... Up to a point... In the case of this one, it's probably one of the more dramatic ones I've ever seen, and the workmanship is above and beyond...
However, since Shep himself, in How to Build Dioramas, (2nd Ed) on page 14 in Chapter 1, "Ideas and Planning" points out this type of scenario (albeit a tank in an urban setting), of the soldiers all going off in different directions, as an example of "a good idea", but remarks that it can be improved upon...
He writes, "Pointing the (tank) gun at the viewer dramatically indicates the the direction of the enemy, and the infantrymen are all shooting and moving in the same general direction." But since I can't scan and post the sidebar sketch he included, it's rather hard to picture what I'm talking about...
I'd have a really tough time judging this one, were I so engaged... The diorama itself is really good, with immediate drama to grab the viewer and hold his attention, a powerful story-line, and the title is perfect, and needs no explaining, but the layout is pulling a few points off it...
You know, upon further reflection, it's quite possible that it's the right idea, just the wrong period in military history... Were it a Napoleanic Wars-era cannon section, it'd be quite believable... In the days of muzzle-loading muskets w/ bayonets and single-shot pistols as primary defensive weapons for the Artillerymen, then this layout would be "9.5"...
Even though the enemy is unseen, the ranges at which they'd be fightng are MUCH closer initially, and if we pictiure THIS era, I can "feel" that the enemy would be upon the gunners in about three more seconds and it'd be all hand-to-hand...
Yupper, this one's a toughie and I understand why y'all liked it... I think the problem I have with it lies more in my background as an artilleryman and knowing what would actually go on the in the defense of a gun-section against an Infantry attack... That said, I think that the result of being able to see something from any viewing angle was as much a happy accident as planned...
Attacking an enemy with as much organic firepower as a field artillery/AT gun battery by dismounted Infantry usually suicidal... Just getting inside the battery's perimeter is a daunting task and one the would probably be quite costly for the attacker, regardless of outcome... It's better to attack artillery with artillery (or airstrikes), lol... There's lots of machine guns, lots of rifles, and lots and lots HE, in the form of projos and mines to deal with before one can get to grenade-range...
Sluggin' it out with a gun battery, especially once it gets its reaction-force rolling, isn't a good way to make a living...
At any rate, lest I sound too anl about it, I think it's a great diorama, with just a couple things keeping it from being an outstanding one...