Huxy; You're right, the pink piping is a bit wide, corrective measures will be taken, the officer is being reprimanded for non-regulation uniform. I knew I didn't like something about him, thanks for pointing that out. The old eyes just aren't what they used to be. I finally had to break down and buy some reading glasses to see what I'm doing. I think I'll try some strips of painted decal film instead of trying to paint them. The smallest brush I have is an 18/0, but it still isn't as fine as I'd like...and I need.
Deafpanzer; There really isn't anything too special about how I do the masonry, other than it takes a lot of time. First I spray the bare plaster with some automotive primer, just to fill in the pores so that it doesn't suck up as much paint. I paint the bricks an overall orange-brown to brick red color, then go back and pick out individual bricks to paint various shades of yellow, pink, purple-brown, orange and red. After that, I give the whole thing a wash of black/burnt sienna. Then I carefully paint in the mortar with thinned Polly Scale Old Concrete. This takes a lot of time to do, but I think it looks pretty good. Another little wash to break up the mortar a bit, then finish it up with random scrubbing of various colored pencils for the highlights.
H von H; I don't know how I could depict how or where the guy was hit? My story is that he was hit off camera somewhere and brought back to the relative safety of the factory where the medic would take care of him. I purposely left the gore to a minimum,... the words of Sheperd Paine still ringing in my ears...There is some blood, (a minor wound, but in a bad location), but I'll agree there should be some on his hand and that of his buddy, I just didn't want to go overboard, as this usually draws fire from the show judges. We'll see if a bit more won't hurt.
I will continue to tweak this for some time to come. A bit more wood debris, maybe something funky like a beat-up toilet in the background, some more wire, pipes, ...my son tells me to put a rat in somewhere...some bottles, cans and other litter. I'll vary the tint on the cobblestones a bit more...whatever else I can think of...and you folks suggest!
Thanks for the comments everyone!