WW1 British Diorama 1/35 Finished

TigerII

Member since
June 2004
From: East Stroudsburg, PA

Posted by TigerII on Saturday, March 14, 2020 5:06 PM

For your first diorama, it came out decent. You learned an invaluable lesson in that IPMS. But now you know what to expect. I immediately noticed the "too" clean sandbags, although your groundwork is muddy enough. Don't be discouraged; you did pretty good.

Achtung Panzer! Colonel General Heinz Guderian

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Niko

Member since
December 2019
From: Florida, USA

Posted by Niko on Tuesday, March 10, 2020 9:33 AM

Thank you all for the advice and support.

I submitted this diorama into a local IPMS competition and did not win anything.

I learned much in the process though and the judges gave me some very good advice which yall also suggested. I plan on applying this to my next work.

The soldiers are not dirty
The tank is not dirty
The tank floats on the mud, has to have weighty feel
The trenches behind the tank should be damaged
It does not look wet enough
It is missing detail in trenches such as signs buckets, tools, etc.

"The farther back you look, the farther forward you are likely to see." - Winston Churchill

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Trumpeter KV-2 1940 1/72

Tamiya Flakpanzer IV Wirbelwind 1/48

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GreySnake

Member since
February 2011

Posted by GreySnake on Tuesday, February 25, 2020 9:34 AM

First off for being the first diorama it came out well.

I’ll piggyback of GMorrisons comment and add a few more. The soldiers should have gasmask haversack carriers. You really didn’t want to at the front without it if a gas attack came. If you look at photos of British soldiers at the front during WWI usually all of them have one around their neck or nearby when at the front.

The other thing that sticks out to me are the sandbags they look way too clean. You’d want them to match the environment. Just think the soldiers going over the top what are they doing going to do? Step on them and get mud on them.

Keep at it you have talent. I’d just say look at a lot of photos during the time period you are portraying to get a good idea how the diorama should look.

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GMorrison

Member since
September 2012

Posted by GMorrison on Tuesday, February 25, 2020 9:09 AM

That came out well. Next dio you build, start by building a scale model of it quick and dirty with scrap. That reaslly helps to get the composition right.

Since you are taking it to a show, some comments seem reasonable. The tank seems out of place. In it's position, it would have had to back up into it, which seems odd. And it would cave in the wall of the trench.

Try integrating the figures into the landscape more. It all looks like wet mud, which is good, so splash it on your guys. Dig them into the surface when it's still wet.

And make sure the guy with his Lewis gun doesn't kill his officer.

Bill

Modeling is an excuse to buy books.

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Gamera

Member since
November 2009
From: SW Virginia

Posted by Gamera on Tuesday, February 25, 2020 8:33 AM

That's really cool! Nice work!

1/72nd is good for a bigger dio but the figures are going to be so small. I really like how in 1/35th it's easier to see your guys!

"I dream in fire but work in clay." -Arthur Machen

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Bish

Member since
December 2002
From: Bury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England

Posted by Bish on Monday, February 24, 2020 2:14 PM

Very nice first dio. I would urge you to consider to sticking to 35th. They don't need to be as big as that and there is a lot more variety in kits and accessories.

I am a Norfolk man and i glory in being so

On the bench: Airfix 1/72nd Harrier GR.3/Fujimi 1/72nd Ju 87D-3

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keavdog

Member since
April 2003
From: USA

Posted by keavdog on Monday, February 24, 2020 12:55 PM

Figures are nicely done! And the kit looks great. Overall awesome 1st diorama.

Lots of good work there.

Thanks,

John

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Niko

Member since
December 2019
From: Florida, USA

WW1 British Diorama 1/35 Finished

Posted by Niko on Monday, February 24, 2020 12:36 PM

Here is my first attempt at making a diorama. I wanted to first say that this turned out to be much bigger than I expected and took a lot more work than I thought! 1/35 is no joke and I will probably do 1/72 dioramas in the future for the sake of my attention span, money, and space.

I built this model with my Emhar 1/35 Mark.IV and men from Tamiya's and Masterbox's WW1 kits. I built the trenches out of wooden coffee stirrers and the base is made of regular sytrofoam and some plywood. The earth is made from water, plaster, and sawdust. I then painted the base with 50 cent craft store paint and a bit of future. The tree is simply a branch I harvested from a dead tree.

I plan on presenting this build at IPMS Flight 19's Modelfest '20 down here in Florida. I know there are mistakes in it, and I know it can be better, but I think I did a decent job.

Asside from the build, I wanted to that you all for your advice and help here. I feel that from my first build, I went a long way and now I'm knee deep into scale modeling with my local IPMS chapter.