As for a way to improve, try looking for reference vids that show actual gun camera footage, that will give you an idea or two about attack and defence positions. I love discovery wings channel, and the history channel and even tlc for this, you can find all kinds of footage if you look for it. Being an artist, I understand composition pretty well actually, being an artist myself, but even within that framework there are things you could do to tweak on it. Take a good image like you have there and maybe greyscale it, and perhaps make the farthest away plane a bit out of focus, but not much, you'd have something that could have been taken from someones gun camera. Just for a bit more interest, since they are planes and not confined to the same up-down relationship that cars are, try having one of them rolled on it's axis to be more off wing plane maybe, that way you could have the same relationship of the two planes, and they'd be basically in the same position relative to each other, but they'd be a bit more independant of each other. Just an idea. What kind of camera do you use? I'd like to get a digital camera, but have no idea what to look for in one.
Sorry if I come off as an ****** here, I'm not really, I'm just trying to toss out a few ideas here, some may be good, some not. I can see how digital manipulation could be a really really neat thing. I should get photoshop one of these days, I should probably get a camera first.
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