- Member since
December 2002
- From: Massachusetts
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Posted by ajlafleche
on Sunday, July 23, 2006 2:55 PM
The individual elements look pretty good, nice weathering and ground wiork, good effects onteh water. It looks like there could have been just a bit more seam clean up such as on the TC's right hand and possibly on the gas mask container of the guy with no helmet. From the pictures, the eyes look okay, no real popeyes. The composition could be stronger. Laying the subject at a slight diagonal to the base give a more dynamic feel to a scene. The water in the forground and the straight line of the shore make a very harsh transition with a lot of dead space. The guy looking at his watch shifts the feeling of the scene to make it seem like the train's late.
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