Overall a nice effort. My critique points are:
1) seams- you have some pronounced ones on the undersufaces, the LEXs and the centerline fuel tanks
2)one the wash- enamels in my experience are superior, they give you more time to apply and clean up. Acrylics dry too rapidly and are not too forgiving if you do not clean them off quickly. One suggestion with enamel washes, especially pin washes for panel lines, moisten the whole area with thinner beforehand, this helps the wash flow, and will lessen if not eliminate the "tide marks" that can be seen where washes pool before clean up.
3) mold line seams on parts, check out the ones on the bottom of the pylons- those are best removed after cutting the part off of the sprue.
Keep at it your efforts will improve. Try different methods and see what works for you.
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