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"An instant to happiness" - A drama in 4 Acts and almost 360 degrees.

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Posted by Wirraway on Wednesday, October 8, 2008 6:27 PM
 EasyMike wrote:
 ps1scw wrote:
 Hans von Hammer wrote:
 EasyMike wrote:

 SteveM wrote:
...Very conceptual...
 

Possibly too conceptual.  I'm not quite sure what's going on here.

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I'm guessing that discharged German soldier is about to see mama...

...yes, soon they will discover that they both survived (hope they're not in the russian zone)...

That's my point.  No one should have to be "guessing" what's going on here.  The vignette ought to tell us that and answer our questions.

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Posted by EasyMike on Wednesday, October 8, 2008 8:56 AM
 ps1scw wrote:
 Hans von Hammer wrote:
 EasyMike wrote:

 SteveM wrote:
...Very conceptual...
 

Possibly too conceptual.  I'm not quite sure what's going on here.

Question [?]

I'm guessing that discharged German soldier is about to see mama...

...yes, soon they will discover that they both survived (hope they're not in the russian zone)...

That's my point.  No one should have to be "guessing" what's going on here.  The vignette ought to tell us that and answer our questions.

 Smile [:)]

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Posted by Hans von Hammer on Saturday, October 4, 2008 9:37 PM

Yeah, they need a squirt of Dullcoat, for sure... I'd sand the shoulder marks and collar tabs off the jacket to get it to look "civilian" as well... Or finish it as a uniform jacket, and add an envelope close by, perhaps on his bag, depicting the discharge papers... If indeed the idea is that the war is over.  Kinda vague there... A nice touch would be perhaps a notice on the fountain stating such, or a newspaper, something... Fill the story in a bit more, Barruel...

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Posted by smeagol the vile on Saturday, October 4, 2008 8:12 PM
I like it, I really do.  Only thing, figures look to glossy.

 

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Posted by ps1scw on Saturday, October 4, 2008 7:53 PM
 Hans von Hammer wrote:
 EasyMike wrote:

 SteveM wrote:
...Very conceptual...
 

Possibly too conceptual.  I'm not quite sure what's going on here.

Question [?]

I'm guessing that discharged German soldier is about to see mama...

...yes, soon they will discover that they both survived (hope they're not in the russian zone)...

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Posted by Hans von Hammer on Wednesday, October 1, 2008 3:05 PM
 EasyMike wrote:

 SteveM wrote:
...Very conceptual...
 

Possibly too conceptual.  I'm not quite sure what's going on here.

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I'm guessing that discharged German soldier is about to see mama...

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Posted by EasyMike on Tuesday, September 30, 2008 7:08 AM

 SteveM wrote:
...Very conceptual...
 

Possibly too conceptual.  I'm not quite sure what's going on here.

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Posted by Buddho on Saturday, September 27, 2008 1:01 PM
I agree with Steve... an excellent idea and concept.

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Posted by SteveM on Friday, September 26, 2008 8:55 PM

Very conceptual, nicely done.

Steve

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"An instant to happiness" - A drama in 4 Acts and almost 360 degrees.
Posted by Barruel on Friday, September 26, 2008 6:43 AM

Hy guys.

This is my latest "play". I called it:

"An instant to happiness" - A drama in 4 Acts and almost 360 degrees.

 

1st Act - Despair

 

2nd Act - Hope

 

3rd At - Recognition

 

4th Act - An Instant to Happiness

 

 

This is still a Work in Progress. I hope to finish it during the next couple of days! 

The "stage" is from Italeri and the "actors" are from Preiser.

I hope you enjoy it!

 

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