Nice work, good shadows on the clothing. Hard to tell about the highlights due to the lighting. You might want to punch up the shadows and highllights on the faces just a bit. Nice work on the eyes, especially in the second one. You want to be careful aboult mold lines, teh really show up on the monitor (The entrenching tool handle iin the second picture.)
Being from Queens and being into figures, you have to visit the Long Island Model Soldiers' Figure Show in November and check out the club's website