Well, the eyes do need work.  Ive never done a figure so I'm not talking down to you in any way.  But the rest of the guy looks great.  I especially like the shield, it looks very cool.  I dont know why but the weapon arm looks wierd to me.  Not something you painted, but how its molded.  Looking at the side view it looks to me like the arm is curved so that the thumb should be pointing down.  IDK, maybe my eyes are playing tricks on me.  But your paint job is really nice.  I know I couldn't do the same.

What Skull said. That right arm/hand suore has some funky sculpting. Not bad for a first figure. As far a s the eyes go, yeah, they need some refinement. After all the years I've been painting figures, there are some that still give me hiughtmares as I try to get them right.

Keep up the good work.

He looks very good!  As you do more, you will just get better.  I do know one thing, if I saw that guy coming at me, I would be moving! As the eyes are now, I think that side view shows a lot of character -- intense, maniacal character!!