It's hard to say, as you don't seem to have achieved much depth of coverage. The oversprayed area on the surface behind is very translucent, and XF-7 is quite a strong red.
1:1 should be ok. You can usually go more thinner than that without any problems.
Did you stir the paint thoroughly before adding thinner?
Another possibility is contamination. Even plain water in the brush may cause "tide marks" like those in the second pic.