vespa boy wrote: |
I agree with Wirraway and Doog. Experiment with the prone figure nearer to the barrel. You have a strong diagonal with the standing figures and the wagon. The hitch on the wagon being angles away from that diagonal leads your eye around the corner to show the viewer what the figures will see in a moment. |
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I agree that could be a better composition...as I get further into it I'll post some different placement options for the corpse...actually, the wagon will probably be more parallel with the front than it is now...
Actually, it was never my intention to imply that the US soldiers had not yet seen the dead German, just that thaey had engaged the enemy, fell one, and were now advancing cautiously as a result...but, having said that, it might be more interesting if they have not yet seen him...another thing I have been thinking of doing that IMO would double the sense of bullets flying is to drill a few holes in the barrel and model some water/wine running out of the holes onto the ground (any tips on ways to do this would be great--although I know of a few methods)...also some bullet holes in the wall/wagon, etc...thoughts?