I think it looks great! I do like the Shangi La!
I might suggest two things to try, you will find them simple yet have a big impact on the way your model looks.
1. Take a sharpened toothpick and trace along the canopy frames...you will easily scratch off the excess paint leaving smooth lines and not scratching the "glass".
2. I little "sludge wash" in the wheel, landing gear and bay doors will really make the details pop out. Swanny has a great "how to" at his site: www.swannysmodels.com
You'll find yourself assicted to these methods pretty quick!