Wow! great job especially for your first try at armor. Only thing I might add is that the vehicles look real clean, so maybe som sand on the vehicles. But I am not in Iraq sooo, I wouldn' t really know how dirty the vehicles there are.
Aside from that everything looks good to me. All the little things that add up, like the radio, ration boxes and the ice chest, and tarps etc. All that stuff adds a lot of detail.
What kits did you use for this?
Great job, and stay safe over there!