Wow, Dragon gave those guys BIG hands!
Your figures need more shading and highlighting, especially around the eyes which need to be narrowed. I'm guessing you're using a commercial flesh color right form the bottle. Those never look like human flesh. Experiment by adding some brown to the base color until you get a match to the back of your hand. Add more brown/burnt sienna for the shadows.
I use vallejo ocolors almost exclussively. My base caucasian flesh is their beige red. Dark skintone is added for the shadows and light flesh, sunny skintone and/or dark flesh are added for highlights as appropriate. Final highlights are done with light flesh.
The figure placement here is kind of awkward. None of them are looking toeards the viewer. That's important to bring the viewer into the scene. It's also important since the figures are the focus of the scene.