Hey Toshi, the cockpit looks good.
And btw you might either dig up some old scrap models or buy something small and cheap to practice NM finishes on. Both foil and Alclad will give good results, I think it's a matter of what you prefer using. Personally I was never able to get the foil to work very well around complex curves but I've seen some people like JohnnyK get perfect results from it.