ajlafleche wrote: |
I have to agree...the story line could use some refinemnet. The Germans don't seem to be walking from the halftrack so much as past it. It seems unlikely the girl is being surprised by these guys since a rather noisy vehicle is parked quite close to her. It also seems to me she would have vacated the premises or at least hidden when she heard the track approaching. |
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I have to agree with ajlafleche here. This would almost have to be classified as fantasy, as the story is highly unrealistic and improbable. Unless I'm mistaken, the Germans didn't usually install SWAT-style near-silent exhaust systems on their personel carriers. They wouldn't have surprised her in the least, she would have heard the vehicle approaching from a hundred yards away at least.
The only way the scene works is if she is deliberately showing off, in which case the Germans are looking waaaay too professional and uninterested.
My advice: if you want to showcase a certain figure, fine, but this is not a great way to do it.
From an execution standpoint, MR, I do have to compliment you. Your figures are definitely getting better - the camo patterns are more even and more realistic than some of the first figures you posted here. Most of the elements look pretty good - there are a few sour points as others have mentioned, but overall your construction and painting look fairly good