Mike, Great job on the Hanriot.
Thanks too for your photo questions, 'cause the answers were enlightening and very clear for us of the Kodak Brownie era.
As a small aside, when you next do a photo shoot , consider the idea of a more contrasting background color.
As an example, a middle blue such as Bafflehead's shots above. That color usually will allow the contrast of the the model and background to be clearer. The use of other colors can be an advantage in bringing out the model depending on its overall color scheme - dark model= lighter background- light model = darker background -retaliative to each other.
Regardless, a clear image in focus, as your last shots show, will always be the best to show your work, its just a practice sort of thing,