M. Brindos
I think I know what's wrong with your pilot. He doesn't have any eyebrows lol. Otherwise I think he'll do nicely. :)
Also, don't forget that the panels behind the cockpit under the glass should be O.D. and NOT the pit color. The same mistake we all seem to make with this kit lol. I did it too!
Otherwise you seem to have this putty monster well in hand. :)